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I
cry
these
azure
tears
t h a t
rain down
upon you now.
D e s p a i r
has asphyxiated all
signs that happiness
h a d e v e r a l l o w e d.
Tears f a l l uncontrolled
This pain won't subside.
S p i r i t is crushed;
Emotions have drained
Body totally numb;
Joy has waned.
Thank you.
A contest entry
- Nothing Boring by cali951.
500 points, ended December 3, 2007, 104 entries
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I have never been able to do this kind of poetry and I am jelouse at your talent. This was a lovely poem
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sometimes one can only feel better after the release of pain. we may not ever want to cry but, sometimes it's the only way to feel free, released, or just plain better.
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Wow this poem was ok I wish I could have felt more feeling since this was about cheating its still ok though thanks for entering my contest
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oh my its so beautiful how the poem is in the shape of a tear drop... VERY CLEVER indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wonderfully sad and written well...................................
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thank you so much for entering this beautiful poem into my contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you again
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Cheaters really piss me off. Not just because they cheat, but they don't seem to (in general) feel remorse for doing it when and if their partner finds out. It hurts I know, even just a kiss makes your heart bleed. Why would they kiss them when you're love is stronger than anything? I guess it wasn't after all. Love the style.
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