Stirring the cauldron
under a full moon
adding the blood
it'll be boiling soon.
The fog rolls in
surrounding the cemetary.
It's All Hallow's Eve
and it sure is scary.
There's a zombie, a vamp
a werewolf too.
They'll be doing my bidding.
I'm out to annihilate a few.
They'll scream forever.
It is music to my ears.
When I bring to life
their very worst fears.
They'll writhe in agony
They'll rant and they'll rave
But my happiest moment is
when they'll beg for the grave.
A contest entry
- Give Az The Chills!!! She LOVES HALLOWEEN!!! by SummerlandRayne.
739 points, ended October 5, 2007, 5 entries
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chills ....this looks like a spooky write, don't think I want to join that party! lol wonderful flow and rhyme...thank you for sharing...best of luck to you in the contest
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Good luck - I find this sort of thing the hardest to write - setting yourself targets and subjects, I always fail.
I think you have done well here, the later verses and the end read very well.
All the best
James
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Nice Halloween poem. -
I am sure that they will be glad to be in that grave!!! Writhing in the agony that is their destiny! Thank you for the entry!
Happy Haunting~
Azlyn
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Oooo. Chilling end! I think the pink might subtract from the overall scariness, hehehe. But even then, it's a great and chilling write. Good luck in the contest, and blessed be!
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