Leaving me naked on the bed
I can't take back the things that I once said
Can't take back the feelings I once led
I can't feed you
Because you don’t want to be fed
Making me breathless
And out of air
Having to go
Not even having a care
Alone in this room
Without you there
Nothing to feed
Of my seeds
Worthless
Lying in this empty bed
Choosing the right path
Instead of getting head
You heard my voice
And hear my moan
Knowing you is gone
And I am alone
Alone and broken
I am alone
Let me forget you ‘til tomorrow
Until you cum back for more
Knowing I would give it to you
But not let either of us get scored
I am ignored
Alone and broken
I sit and wait
Waiting for my one
To reawake my fate
Upon the star’s date
Alone and broken
I sit and wait
Renewing a raped girls
Love.Fate.Desnity.Love.
Author notes
I wrote this on August 10th 2006. I know this is not my normal type of poem, to say the very least, but I thought that I would bring it up, thinking that it might be interesting to see other people's reactions to a somewhat racy write I have. I'm ready your the Grammar Natzi's and erotic lovers, and anyone else, looking at this poem, ready to tell me who they precieve this, or even me. Let me at it.
Please tell me what you think.
Comments
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Oh a very good poem. The start was something really not you haha but I LOVED it...whole the poem. Nice job once again.
Keep writing and God Bless
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i love this baby. you are such an amazing writer, the feeling in this seems so soft, yet the words are anything but soft. i love how mixed the two worlds together.
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I can tell this is an emotional write for you. I'm hoping you can love again after what did happen to you before. It's always a difficult situation to trust once rape has been done to someone. Hopefully in the future things will be more graceful!
Ted E
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