You shot an arrow
right through my heart
and it was love at first sight
you loved me for a while
but it was all a silly game
that only you could play
no one could save me
the damage you've done
you won my love
then took it away
now there is only an empty space
where you once were
the love we had
is all disappeared
you're gone from my life
and I must go on
trying to find someone else
but it's hard to do
when you took that part of me
that I need to live with
there is no more hope
not in this empty world you've put me in
give it back to me
so I can be one again
A contest entry
- Giving Up On That Thing Called Love by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended October 2, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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This reminds me so much of the emotions that I'm feeling right now!!!! Very well written! I very much enjoyed reading it!!!!
~DAWN~ -
Beautifully sad... Cupid's arrow got stuck in my chest and the doctors say I can't remove it... If I do, I may die and I still beg them to do it, but they say euthenasia isn't their thing. Goddammit! Loved the hurt and pain running throughout this piece.
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