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All the things

All the things that I've done wrong

All the things that i've done right

My heart has been completely torn

Tears streaming down my face

I want to hurt myself

I want to die

But he holds me back like theres something left

I sit here alone

Thinking to myself

Why try why lie to myself

All in all I keep getting hurt

With every truth i have told

Someone makes a lie

Life hates me

No one cares

I fend and fight for myself

Only to see nothing change

All things I want

All the things i can never get

If the white building starts calling my name

Who will be the one to sit next to me the entire time

Who will try to keep me alive

All the things that i've done wrong

All the things I've done right

It's all a fight for nothing in my book

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  • X iMPERFECTiON x
    October 24, 2007

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    h/o im delteing this contest due to lack of entries. im making a different one that you can enter back in to. its called "ANY TYPE OF POETRY - PREWRITES ALOUD - FOR PPL WITH NO TROPHIES" thanks


  • X iMPERFECTiON x
    October 24, 2007
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    this is good but please put your name in author's box so i know you have no trophies!! thnaks