The stars don't come out when you're gone.
The days are endless and dead.
The nights are as long and as lonely
As the downhearted days up ahead.
My hands have grown cold without your hands
To grasp so tightly in mine,
And my bed is so lonesome without you
And I cannot stop thinking about you
When the stars all refuse to shine.
Do you remember the star I promised you?
The one that hangs over the picnic table in the backyard?
It's still there for you
Whenever you want to come home for it.
I miss you, Sarah.
Please tell me what you think
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This is such a cute, yet heartbreaking piece.
"The stars don't come out when you're gone.
The days are endless and dead.
The nights are as long and as lonely
As the downhearted days up ahead."
My favourite part of the poem. I actually enjoyed the rhyme in this one- which is abnormal for me haha
Great job.
I hope Sarah came back :]
-Lily♥
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this is a really sweet piece..It sounds as though the one who inspired it really means a lot to you!! nice write!
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oh Andy, I miss you too! It breaks my heart to be away from you for such a long period of time! I love this poem...you've really touched me with it! I love you!
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