Within the power of the sacred light,
of the moon as it shines upon the night.
In the name of the gods and all ye spirits.
By the moon goddess, I humbly ask of thee,
to protect me from whom shall curse evil against me.
Return their darkness that has shadowed my light.
Shield me from their chanted verse.
Let them suffer their own curse.
Let them know the pain they bring unto me.
Let this burning be their burning,
and keep their darkness away, from returning.
Let the pain they have caused me,
fall upon them, and their own curse, they shall see.
A contest entry
- Cast a Spell by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended October 13, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Magical!!!!!
Thank you for this wonderful entry in our Spell Casting Contest!!!!

Great imagination and creativity in your piece.
The flow and rhyme is very well written

"Return their darkness that has shadowed my light.
Shield me from their chanted verse.
Let them suffer their own curse...
Let the pain they have caused me,
fall upon them, and their own curse, they shall see."
REVENGE!!!
This is a diffirent approach in the contest. I like it


Thank you for the entry and I wish you the very best in the contest!
David

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Thank you for your magical entry
G'day Shadows-stars
"Let the pain they have caused me,
fall upon them, and their own curse, they shall see"
Yes, Yes, Yes ... fabulous ! Wonderful spell/reverse curse ! Let them suffer what you have
Love it
Best of luck in our contest
Stay safe
~Amanda


