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Grief

Oil and hypocrisy
Treachery
Animosity

Beauty recoils
In a shame based glaze

Deserving
Retreat into secluded sobriety
Hidden by the pyre
Six feet under the stone

Just beneath the confessional fire

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  • Gott ist tot
    November 4, 2007
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    Great imagery, this seemed like quite a dark write.
    Thanks for your comments.