Part one
Her eyes often hide,
kept emotions under a lid.
She bared the weight of the
WORLD
with so much grace,
in a dress of white lace.
Always at her side,
friends to abide.
They barred the weight of the
WORLD
All in their love,
for the moon queen from above.
They laughed and
smiled in the endless stand-
He bared the weight of her
HOPE
all in the name of
the moon queen from above.
She kept whispers,
of hope and glimmers.
Kept them for the weight of
HOPE
They all risked so much,
of earths rowdy bunch.
Part two.
She fought evil through so much hope,
fought for the eternal light with a grope.
She danced through your mind enticing,
fantasy dreams of childhood hope, memorizing.
We watched them dance, we watched them fight,
all in the name of justice, fighting evil by moonlight.
Winning love from the hearts of many in the daylight,
but always keeping her eye on the fight.
She always was quick to forgive,
she let so many begin to live.
She will never let her friends all down,
she was always there till the end to a white gown.
She wielded a crystal of fluttering hopes wings,
ensuring earth would see many springs.
Did you cry the day it was all done,
feeling the tale had only just begun?
Author notes
HopeWithWings.
Alright the part one is a little strange, but I liked the way it was unique for my writing and that it was different.
I remember the days I used to watch Sailor Moon, heck if I hadn't of lost my The dark queen of the moon and her circus dvd I'd pop it in now and get reading to laugh and smile. Anime junkies beware I'm gripped by everything.
Furthermore I would like to humbly thank x-GraveDancer-x for starting this wonderful contest and giving those of us who watched Sailor Moon a chance to return to the days of being a little kid and sitting there infront of the T.V. and watching it.
A contest entry
- [Sailor Moon] by whiterabbit..
300 points, ended November 19, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is wonderful. I love the way you wrote it. I love the way you ended it too. I'm so happy you like my contest =], I'm having fun with it. Thanks so much for entering.
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Thank you so much, but I fear that never will justice be served to the anime that so many people watched as a child. Thank you for hosting a wonderful contest!
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Hope, you captured the fantasy,
making it "real" in both
emotion and adventure.
Fantasy drives the writer,
pleases the audience,
as evidenced by tonight's fare,
"Chuck" (my fun favorite),
followed by "Heroes"
concluding with "Journeyman,"
all on NBC, all characters
with unusual powers.
Regarding your last two lines,
created characters take on a life of their own.
I still miss the "Gilmore Girls" and "Veronica Mars"--
so I share your regrets on Sailor Moon.
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