Vines trailing into a tree
Blossoming red death
By the shattered remains
Of an arrows breath
Into the darkness
Called the king
From somewhere in the sleepy tower
A meteor has struck guilty thoughts in my eyes
And I have drenched myself in powder
The sun it has set
With matches and a bet upon the land
Of nothing but questions and cries
North, South, East,
West?
Could you guess the rest?
A lock picked by fire
A sword blazing through my chest
Death
The ocean drank me down
With billions of picked flowers for the dawn
A ring or two in the opening of light
What went wrong?
Author notes
I'm giving myself a month. That's all. After that I don't know what I'm going to do. I wrote this after a painting I did, it wasn't intentionally I just started talking to it. Once I got past the first lines I liked it too much to leave it there. SOO this poem was born. Short, not like me, but this is what it would be like if I was rambling poetically to myself.... Not that I do that all the time???
Hahaha.
Biddy Chicken???
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i love the blossoming red death
totaly stunning write!
<3
Darkness
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:D Thanks mate!
Probably one of the oddest i've done. I am honored to have your being of poetry light to shed upon thy em..self...LOL thanks!
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Wow
holy crap, this write is phenomenal. you have a lot of talent. i could literally see this poem being painted on canves with oil as i was reading it. i will most definitely be reading more of your work.
Rob -
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You sent my imagination in so many directions. The shortest but most complete fairy tale I've ever read. Kudos!
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Yes, well..I don't usually write about stuff from fairy tales. Lol. But I just started reciting it so I said What the Hay Kali lets make it a poem. Abrakadabra. there it is.
Like that song..
Abra-Abra-Kadabra
I'm gonna reach out and grab ya.
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I was reading your comments...lol, you guys are crazy funny!
Oh dang, I'm sorry, I have to come back and finish this comment! But I'll leave my applause in the meantime...
cuz it rocks!!
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Ah, thats horshradish.
Yeah I'm not sure whats wrong with us. I keep telling her we need to write an awesomely hilarious book. BUTT NOOOoOo OUR managers would never approve. Just kidding, I just thought of that idea yesterday AND I don't have any managers that I know of. Although, you never know. I do feel as if I'm being watched lately. Like that Micheal Jackson song. Of course, thats kind of a creepy thing to say these days. Considering his history...ererm.erm. Awkward. Snail.
Oh take your time, forget about it. Never again! I knew a guy that pooped his pants in 8th grade.
"Anticipation.
Oh there it is." (Just a funny thing when talking about that kind of natrual buisness anyway...)
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HELLYEA
I love you mann. THIS was good. I could see what you mean. I am such in a delima. I can't call you till saturday, can't get on the computer till saturday, and I feel like I want do something stupid and rash. I got to go, its Eight thirty and I'm in the school library. I WANT YOU TO COME OVER ON SATURDAY OR ME COME OVER THERE OR SOMETHING. I am so mad about that, I MISS YOU LIKE CORNDOGS ON A FARM.
GOT TO GO BEFORE IM LATE
LUVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ME.
HAHAHHA AA
bY BOP.
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Sasquatch
Also. My picture looks like I'm looking up at you or the sky. I'm really confused. And need to stop stalling homework just because its gay and I dont want to do it. That wasn't nice. waitiwaitwait! YES. DING DANG THE SPRING HAS SPRANG.
hahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Arburs
Are be you...arse?
(Arburs=starburst)
I laughed for five minutes with jessi about that. We were crying. On our face. From eyes on our hands.
I use the grass to wipe my faaacee too wipe myyy teearrr...
ARM ARM ARM IM GOING TO EAT YOUR LEG OFF. HAHA..."what are you going to do bleed on me?" monty python and the holy grail.
I'm going to make a hilarious book. The funniest book created. It shall take time if you need me, I'll be in my office, the one with the sign on the door that says 'kool-aid jug man please use this door, not my wall.'
He visits me on thursdays, didn't i tell you? -
SUPER SONIC DISCO
Hm, well that was salty. Dude if you fed a pig sasausage, what would happen? And I decided heritage absidence class is quite hilarious, YOU KNOW WHY!
well i'm not telling you why
Saturday??? Thats not long at all another 24 and a half hours to go. Good luck BUB. Thats weird cause I feel like doing something stupid and rash. Perhaps we should do it together. Yeah. We'll make a plan. Rash radish.! WE'LL EAT A RADISH AFTER WE PICK IT FROM THE TALLEST MOUNTAIN IN THE WORLD. Ireland and Romania might be the most awesome countries..
Ever.
Maybe.
Oh yeah I miss you too sort of.
Just kidding its more like i kind of miss you.
Oh oh just kidding.
I actually miss you as much as I miss Augusta. hahaha..ha! But not more than I miss that doodoo head person of a poopface feces eater.
Wow. That was nasty.
I'm suppose to be doing homework. But I've got a new word to replace person...Pooson.
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