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Impact of Love

The rareness of true love
The kind that never fades
Is found only by the moving
Of the all-powerful Fate

The touching of two hearts
That loves for eternity is
So powerful and strong
Not much can withstand it

The cord of love
Is the bond that
Keeps the world from
Falling to pieces

So when two hearts touch
It's so important for
All the love to grow
The world depends on it

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  • LoveToLaugh07
    October 2, 2007

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    I agree with this poem. I absolutely love it! I love the way it is written and the things that you mentioned. True love is definitely hard to find, but when you do find it it is a sacred gem that should never be lost.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 2, 2007

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    The world is nothing without love...we were created in love and MEANT to love...
    Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest!




  • J-Lee18m
    October 1, 2007

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    Hmm...

    What is this love that you talk about I know it not it doesn't sound like me and my baby crystal lol. I love you sis, keep up the great work and good luck


  • bonjourbunnie
    October 1, 2007
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    Oh, I like this one. I completely agree with it; the world runs entirely on love.