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Walking

Walking with my dreams
The hope to be my imgation
Like I planned it out
Walking side by side
I watch the sky play out
What God shows the clouds
As my hopes walk by me
With my dreams,and imagtion

Nothing can stop my love

Or way I walk with pride

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  • Forlorn Dreams
    October 1, 2007

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    This was a nice poem. A little repetative, and a tad confusing. But I think, I hope, I got the just of it. Thank you for entering and best wishes!

    Kelcey