When your heart touched mine
A eternal flame was lit
Filling my life with a light
That could brighten all my days
Warming me, give me strength
To conquer the tasks I meet
And the passion and fire
To love you forever
Until the end of our days
A contest entry
- Hearts...PIF-Quickie by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended October 3, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aw this is sweet! I like this alot. It's really good. I think my favorite parts are ...
When your heart touched mine
A eternal flame was lit
This was great!
Megan -
Simple and sweet a lovely tribute to the one you love!
Great write enjoyed reading it!
~Lisa~
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Very nicely done!
So much said in so few words; great job!
Wishing you all the best in this contest -
Great poem, short but so much meaning!
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love is so sweet and you shine with love in your words in this poem
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