You broke,
my dreams,
shattering them,
like a broken bottle.
destroying them,
crahing them,
killing me,
like a broken bottle.
Author notes
Prompt: broken bottle. when i said this aloud all I could do was write this.
A contest entry
- Prompt given by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended October 2, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great intensity with this write. The repetition serves to magnify that. Good luck in the contest.
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Very profound words of real emotion... x
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