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Fantasy

I sought after what I could not know
I despertly wanted something I can never have
I longed for someone just beyond my reach
I wish the impossable
I dream what I know cannot be

But sometimes my fantasies,
Are better then reality

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I hope you like it. It is kind of random and off the top of my head. Enjoy

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  • Ms.Melon
    October 27, 2007
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    This is really strong. I know what you mean. Life just seams like well I dont know but. Nice!


  • ScrewAllOfYou
    October 20, 2007

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    True, fantasies can be so much better than reality. I see no point of being random anywhere here. You're talking about

    things just out of reach
    things that will never be
    all things that describe
    a wonderful fantasy.

    Excellent


  • SilverRain
    October 1, 2007
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    Very short but I can see where what ya mean! Great write! Thanks for sharing!