Don't mind our tears
We'll be ok
You're in a better place
Just fly away
Fly away
You're finally free
There's no more pain
Just simply be
Kiss the stars
Rest upon a cloud
You were a great man
We all are proud
Lay down in a field
Of roses soft and yellow
Live in a tranquel world
Tell God I said hello
Soar into the heavons
Look down on us and smile
Don't feel sad and lonly
We'll meet you in a while
So stand before us all
And take your final bow
I'll cry but I'm happy for you
You're flying with the angels now
Author notes
Prompt # 2
Mommas Fallen Angel
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Comments
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LOVE IT!!! definitly a fave meggy. =] a few spelling mistakes but when I'm tired I notice that stuff more. lol =] but lovely write. keep it up =
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This was so sweet and so well written. And of curse I know what its about. I'm very proud of you. I love this, all of it. I love the lines "Kiss the stars, Ret upon a cloud" and "Lay down in a field, Of roses soft and yellow" Those are my favorite lines, but the entire thing is a great poem. A favorite for sure
Wonderful writing here Dearest!! 
~Kelcey
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