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Kiss in the Rain

I want to kiss you in the rain
feel the cold drops hit my face
as your lips touch mine

I want to kiss you in the snow
after riding through the hills
on your snowmobile

I want to kiss you in the fall
run my hands through your hair
as the leaves fall around us

I want to kiss you in the summer
with the warm sun beating down upon us
and the cool river at our toes

Spring, Winter, Summer and Fall
it doesn't matter where we are
I just want you to know
that I like you for who you are
and for every moment I spend with you
I'm content,
because I'm with you
~Tanya*May~

let me know what you think, i was sitting here listening to the rain and thinking of a certain someone and it just came at me!! hope you like

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  • breathethedream
    October 19, 2007
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    aw cute


  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    October 10, 2007
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    Great Job

    I really liked it its great.


  • peace.
    October 1, 2007
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    This is a really good poem. My favorite lines are: Spring, Winter, Summer and Fall
    it doesn't matter where we are
    I just want you to know
    that I like you for who you are
    and for every moment I spend with you
    I'm content, because I'm with you

    Great job-and keep up the good work.