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Just a thought...Just a moment

When I thought I was giving up,
pen down,
and all hope gone away.

 

I find my mind drifting and dashing its way past walls of stupid!
When I feel strong I feel evil,
when I feel weak I feel small.
< I'm a poet! This roller coaster is the in in my pen!>

 

Blasting off with a hell of a bang!
Daring my toes to push past that line,
feeling millimeter even though there is someone to catch me.

 

The braceful me feels like "trash",

blissful ignorance like the fact....

I just wouldn't quit smoking for anyone else,

not because I couldn't but beause I didn't care to try.

 

< If I ever had a bubble of personal space,

there's a little kid poking it with a stick>

I'm hearing that voice of reason again,

comfortable telling me I've got it good,

sometimes I just need to look. 

 

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Mhh...wrote this at skool in my stash...

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  • jeffstofsky
    January 11
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    good write

    love the emotion that is used which totally paints the picture. great write