Cupid has a magical way
of causing souls to sing.
His arrow gently pierces
two lonely hearts,
resulting in inexplicable beauty;
Harps resound glorious tunes,
while doves' wings
flutter furiously,
and angel's eyes
turn green with envy.
Author notes
Prompt is: "When Two Hearts Touch"
A contest entry
- Hearts...PIF-Quickie by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended October 3, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is really sweet
His arrow gently pierces
two lonely hearts,
resulting in inexplicable beauty;
Goodluck to you in the contest.

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Thank you my dear
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Very, very nice

I like this one a lot!
How wonderful it is when cupid's arrows hit their mark
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Thanks for the wonderful comment
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