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Arrow's Path

Cupid has a magical way
of causing souls to sing.
His arrow gently pierces
two lonely hearts,
resulting in inexplicable beauty;
Harps resound glorious tunes,
while doves' wings
flutter furiously,
and angel's eyes
turn green with envy.

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Prompt is: "When Two Hearts Touch"

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    This is really sweet
    His arrow gently pierces
    two lonely hearts,
    resulting in inexplicable beauty;
    Goodluck to you in the contest.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 1, 2007

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    Very, very nice
    I like this one a lot!
    How wonderful it is when cupid's arrows hit their mark
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!