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Heartbeat.....

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Love me and hold me real tight.
Kiss me with all of your might
from the top of my head,

to the tip of my toes.
Do you think this possible?

Do you suppose?
My heart's pounding, beating real fast.
Touch me, kiss me, make me yours
at last.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    October 3, 2007

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    awwwww, such a whirling poem with love fluttering in every line!
    This is soft and sweet...

    Lynda


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 1, 2007

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    Most beautiful, my friend
    Sigh...
    I wish you the best of luck in this contest!
    All the best,
    Sandy