Magic Mountain
Reflections on The lake
The forest seems to embrace it
The alabaster snow peaks shine
Magnificently on the water
Giving it, it's majestic beauty
A contest entry
- Short or Free Form Contest by misticmoonlite.
700 points, ended October 4, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful write! Short but speaks "mountains"! I am partial to the mountains. Love them, they always take my breath away, and you have captured this poetically!
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Great write!! The words are purfect!! The picture is beautiful!! With such a glow to it!!
I love it!!
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SIMPLY....beautiful! Could have seen the picture with your eyes shut.
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Gorgeous write. Such beautiful scenery unfolds in your words. Certainly a well deserved win. Thank you for sharing this.
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Very beautiful write...I know this mountain well as I visit it every night in my dreams. Perfect words choice and flow. Well desreving of the Gold.
Best to you!
mystic
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Wonderful
I do love poetry of natures bliss
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A lovely picture and poem to accompany it. Appropriate title for sure. A gold trophy sure adds to its brilliance as well. (No need for apostrophe in it's.)
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Magic Mountain
Reflections on The lake
The forest seems to embrace it
The alabaster snow peaks shine
Magnificently on the water
Giving it, it's majestic beauty
Your entire poem is perfect
Riftkin -
wow great write congrats on gold
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