close your eyes and forget
forget that your friend doesnt seem to care
forget all the pain she caused
[forgiveness]
open your mind and remember
remember what you said to her
remember how you made her feel
[regret]
you go through this process in your head
you keep tryingagain and again
[it doesnt work]
you still feel the pain
you still feel the sadness
but you cant ignore yor "best friend"
[confusion]
you pass her in the halls
you smile and say hi
but inside...youre hurt
[pain]
you hurt because of her thoughtlessness
you hurt because she didnt think of your pain
you hurt because she thought ony of herself
[nobody else]
you cry because your confused
you cry hard and long
you cry but never let her know
[sadness]
you hide behing a broken smile and live. life
[how will it end up?]
Author notes
something my friend did realy hurt me and i didnt know any other way to let her know how i felt exept in a poem so here it is...i hope she reads it and undertands
A contest entry
- BackStabber! by GypsyEyes.
575 points, ended April 18, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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oh my god this was what i was thinking about when i made this contest! congrats on making my hour! cool poem. thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck!
NineTailedFox -
I really don't know what to say.... This just.... just.... I didn't....
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fuck.
Great poem though. I really loved it. [poem wise...] =]
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Sometimes we go through a lot of pain before we realize we're better off without it.
Nicely written, this write is so true.
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