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Gift

When forlorn in darkened heaven
feeling want for more
than heaviness and space

I dared a whisper to the One
who spoke expanse
and made this growing place

When silent echo reached for Hearing
Answer searched my twinkled tearing

And granted gift in blissful finish--
Companion ever, wish's fullness.

 

 

 

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  • ellipsist
    October 1, 2007
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    quite nicely done, poet!

    beautiful!

    I love the "wish's fullness"

    excellent!


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 1, 2007
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    this is very sweet and lovely, you did a wonderful take on the prompt, congrats on your silver!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 1, 2007
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    Oh I like this you have done a nice job with this prompt.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    Prompt:I am like a falling star who has finally found her place next to another in a lovely constellation, where we will sparkle in the heavens forever.


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