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This is Dedicated

This is dedicated to my parents, without whom I never would have learned hatred, loneliness, and pain...

My eyes bleed rivulets
Pouring my soul down y face
From where you tried
To rip it out
You've dragged as many tears
As you could take from me
And still you want more
You won't stop until
I'm broken on the floor
Try as I might
To run away from you
You always find me
Beating upon my flesh
With stone fists
I've finally given in
You've broken my spirit
And I'm left to pick up the pieces
In a pool of my own blood

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  • Curtkf
    November 29, 2007

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    Wow

    Wonderfully intense, and oh so very sad. Way to let the emotion out and then to capture it for all to share. this is a really good one, way to go.


  • HoneyFire
    October 1, 2007

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    This is so sad, so depressing and it seems ever lasting. Don't let your parents tear you down. You have the strength to get up and move on.