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Heavenly Love

Silvery moon and streaks of light,
eyes now sparkle with sheer delight.
Visions dance with moonbeams so high,
trailing our love throughout the sky.

Luminous stars speak out to me,
lambent star brings hope silently.
Meander like a falling star,
shortens the distance from afar.

Nova ejecting their gases,
create beauty, twilight passes.
Spellbound thoughts of endless love,
wish on stars in heaven above.

Captivate with God's creations,
interrupt thoughts, hesitations.
Dream of castles beyond the moon,
to be dashed by the sunrise soon.


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  • bruntbeauty
    October 1, 2007

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    Ahhhh, I'm going to take the "love" mention as a motherly kind of love (I'm not really experiencing the love of a relationship right now).

    I love this poem, it seems to fit all together. There's nothing I could think of that would need to be given or taken away. Thank you for the entry and I wish you tons of luck!


  • Arsenic-
    October 1, 2007

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    Absolutly fun! This is a joy to read. You have a captivating sing-song approach and a great appreciation of creation. Thanks for sharing.


    • Sandygram silver member
      October 2, 2007
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      Hi Michael, Thank you for the nice comment. You know how I appreciate your comments my friend. I always love writing about the universe and stars. There is so much to think about out there. Thanks for stopping by. Always, Sandy