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Memories Scorned

As I look back
On memories
I began to become misty eyed
The pain and heartache
Reborn again and again

Why did I
Hurt you so Bad
why could I not see what I had
It was all I could do not to cry
When I let you die
Why could I not see you
The pain in your eyes
Why cant I
Feel it
Am I dead inside
I dont know
No I dont know

If I could take it all back
Baby dont you know I would
I would take it all back
The pain and misery I gave unto you
Why cant it all go back to the way it was
Is it over?
Can it really be over?


Why did I
Hurt you so Bad
why could I not see what I had
It was all I could do not to cry
When I let you die
Why could I not see you
The pain in your eyes
Why cant I
Feel it
Am I dead inside
I dont know
No I dont know

Bridge:
The rage built up
its now boiling over
But I cant see me
Anymore
The facade that I wore
Is Melting away
And all thats left now
Is a scared helpeless child

Why did I
Hurt you so Bad
why could I not see what I had
It was all I could do not to cry
When I let you die
Why could I not see you
The pain in your eyes
Why cant I
Feel it
Am I dead inside
I dont know
No I dont know

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  • BeautifulDisaster9
    October 19, 2007
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    That's fantastic.

    Nice job.

    Very emotional write you have here.

    ♥BD9♥


  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    October 1, 2007

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    I could see so much of myself in that poem. I take from the way it's set up that it must be a song? Really great writing either way! Keep it up!