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Moonlight memories

Basking in the blue light
veil danceing in the breeze
upon the graceful hilltop
soft grass beneith her feet
Starlight stirs desires
as he dips her in his arms
The stars and moon colideing
For the fireworks in her eyes
Lieing on the hilltop
Forgetting all their fights
All they want to make is now
Moonlight memories tonight

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option C in the contest, title shown. not my best work but im at school so its a bit more difficult to think

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  • Summer Dawn
    October 8, 2007
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    beautiful poem but it does not pertain to the subject of loneliness. however, very nice poem.