Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Your Nightmare

Imagine broken glass,

shattered under your feet,

imagine a desperate heart,

barley able to beat..

Imagine an infected needle,

piercing through your vein,

or lets imagine a tortured soul,

lost in eternal pain..

Now lets imagine a black addiction,

with so much hell to give,

imagine stabbing your arms,

becomes your only will to live..

Now I want you to picture bruises,

on every inch of your skin,

now imagine the devil himself,

clawing his way within..

Now pretend your not pretending,

you can hear his fucking call,

now imagine this was real,

you weren't imagining at all..

Lucky you it was all a bad dream,

you get to escape his burning knife,

yet what you call your nightmare,

is what I call my life..

                                             -Sara

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7
  • nvraskednvrknown
    April 19, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    sorry for the miss spell I mean good

  • nvraskednvrknown
    April 19, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    very goog

    yeah I personally haven't done that certain thing but you better believe that i've done everything else and for a very long time and the place I just got out of had alot of what you speak of going on so yeah I enjoyed it


  • wendy
    October 2, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Wow!It sounds like the life of a heroin addict. Very sad indeed.


  • Arizona Sunset
    October 2, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    very excellent imagery usage, and very powerful the content of this poem is....your flow was wonderful, the last two lines make a strong statement, what one calls a nightmare, is what you call a life...thank you for sharing


  • rollingzen
    October 1, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    very accurate description of your reality.....spelling error with 'barley' should be 'bearly'


  • daddys girl08
    October 1, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    omg, this is deep real deep. it makes me want to cry


  • My Selfish Romance
    October 1, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Really good, and true.

1 - 7 of 7