he comes from no where
rose in sight
he is a mystery,
with all loves might
he drops down silently,
with a tuxedoed mask
where he came from?
no one will ask.
a girl,
she loves him,
but she knows him well,
though she doesnt know it,
she is under his spell.
alone in the night,
a sad dove calls
a boy in black suit?
please do not fall?
A contest entry
- [Sailor Moon] by whiterabbit..
300 points, ended November 19, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice, has a kind of mysterious air to it, lots of metaphors though a few are hidden. Nice Poem
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nice
i like it
it haa mistery (sorry can't spell)
like a warning sign
and she is questioning
i like it!
grate rhyme
good rhythem
well said!
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I really like this and the feel that the whole poem has. I really enjoyed this. Great write and thanks for entering.
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Ah....I like this. This has a fairy tale-ish quality and a darkly romantic air. Good poem!
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