Hope you have a fantastic day,
And have many reasons to smile.
Presents and cards,
People who care,
You been waiting for this day for a while..
Beautiful 16, thats what you are.
Intuitive, young and smart.
Remember to stop and make a wish,
Take a deep breath to blow out those candles.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEET 16.
Don't get to drunk or be sick.
And don't forget to stay up late
Your a young adult at last.
(I know it's poor, but I wanted each letter at begining to spell out HAPPY BIRHDAY!!)
A contest entry
- Sweet 16!- Make me Happy! by RuLives4GodOnly.
350 points, ended October 16, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Its good
I have tried several of these and I think this is done very well and a sweet message
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No...not poor...this is rich in beauty!
A wealth of heartfelt wishes painted pretty by your sweet pen!
This is lovely and a joy to read. You are so kind!
Great acrostic and I love the background!
Blessings! Tammy
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No, not poor at all, dull at some points but not poor! lopl! Thank you SO much for writing this! And btw, I don't drink so there's no WAY I could possibly get sick!(Unless of course, I eat too much cake! lol ) Again, thank you and good luck in my contest!
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