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just cease...

              I never

                  want to hear

                               your voice again....

                     or

                        to hear

                                your body moving...

 

                                   go away

                                            die....

                       

 

                                just stop

                                just cease

                                     forever....if you can

                              

 

                                and please

                                                        stop me

 

                                                                   wanting

                                                                             you......

 

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  • absenceoftouch
    October 11, 2007

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    i found your poem interesting and provocative..i have been in that situation before and it is terribly hard to let go of..hope it works out..your anguish is understood


  • LovetimesLove
    October 1, 2007
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    Is this what your really want, is my first impression. Stop me wanting you.