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  • forbidden-colour
    December 3, 2007
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    It's very beautifu;
    Thank you for entering.
    Loved this.
    x


  • anaisnais
    November 8, 2007

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    Pretty jitty, not sure I associate the butterfly with the eyes mind...mmm want to drift with it dreamily...


  • TheAshtrayGirl
    October 29, 2007
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    :)

    Awwww that is so sweet and beautiful
    Thanks for entering my contest
    Jaz <3


  • parasol
    October 24, 2007

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    This was a very lovely poem. It had nice imagery and figurative language. I think this also had a philosophical lesson inside it. I enjoyed this poem. Best of luck in my contest.
    - Andi

  • ocerus
    October 16, 2007

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    Veeeeeeeery pretty! Iwill have to pay a few points here, but I am defintely giving you some points here! GREAT JOB!!! - oce


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    Yes indeed...this one is very good. You have used wonderful imagery, and it has a really happy feel to it. Well done and good luck in the contest

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