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I Want

I want to make love
All through the night
I want a touch
That makes me feel right
I want kisses
Beyond my control
I want a fantasy
That was real long ago

I want warmth
And ecstasy

I want him
Like he wants me

I want to relate
Get inside his mind
I want what
I deserve to find
I want a pure heart
So tender, so true
I want to make love
Will that do




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  • mentalseductionz
    November 20, 2007

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    I Want
    I want to make love
    All through the night
    I want a touch
    That makes me feel right
    I want kisses
    Beyond my control~~LOVE TO BE WRITTEN BOUT THAT TOUCHES THE SOUL
    I want a fantasy
    That was real long ago

    I want warmth
    And ecstasy
    HOTTER THEN A ERUPTING VOLACANO OF LAVA

    I want him
    Like he wants me
    DEEPER THEN THE DEPTHS OF THE OCEAN

    I want to relate
    Get inside his mind~~LEARNING HIM FROM SIDE TO SIDE,FRONT & BEHIND
    I want what
    I deserve to find
    I want a pure heart
    So tender, so true
    I want to make love
    Will that do


    FELT THIS PIECE TO THE FULLEST.......THANKZ FOR THE WARM SINsation


  • Endeavor gold member
    October 3, 2007

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    Very Good

    I want what
    I deserve to find
    I want a pure heart
    So tender, so true
    I want to make love
    Will that do

    Very Beautiful

    Rick

  • hurtgurl
    October 1, 2007
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    this piece is truly beautiful


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    Yay...go get 'em girl Love this write. It's to the point and flows really well. Best of luck in this contest