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Fuck[(me)] Like a Staaaaaar

fuck me like the *star* you think I am

you've got nothing((nothing I tell you))on the things -inside- my head

let me taste your vodka stained lips [again]

Oh, no condoms? That's okay

fuck me anyway

we'll deal with what comes later

                                                                   **later**

 

 

 

 

 

It's not like you've ever given me a reason anyway

you've still got nothing on the inside my head

but what if later comes now?

what if tomorrow is today and

                                                       !!BAM!!

                                                                        there's c o n s e q u e n c e s for our actions

 

 

 

 

I've got that two-in-the-morning-walk-of-shame to look forward to

dorm rooms are only fun for a little while

with their malnourished and over-video-gamed inhabitants

but it's okay

fuck me like the star you 'think' I am

pour another shot

turn out the lights

 

 

 

BOOM.

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  • Dead Star--x
    October 4, 2007
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    i think you start out very well and i love the repition of fuck me like a star
    I've got that two-in-the-morning-walk-of-shame to look forward to

    that line is so original and i absolutely love it♥
    good luck & thanx for your entry!!!
    Dead Star--x


  • Dancing Marionette
    October 3, 2007
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    the background makes this kind of hard to read because some of the lines are cut off by the lines of the paper.
    but besides that damn. i loved this. I adore the title, it just screams beauty to me, and the line about the two in the morning walk of shame blew me away.
    this was really great bby.


    • pointlessdayz
      October 5, 2007
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      okay, I changed the background cause I agree with you that it was too hard to read. But I still like that bg cause it makes the piece feel like its a journal entry. But w/e, you can read it better now!


      • Dancing Marionette
        October 5, 2007
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        it is so much easier to read now [: but i agree with you, i really did like that background, i think when you go to use it again, you may want to like add spaces between some of the lines that way its not on the line of the paper itself [:


        • pointlessdayz
          October 5, 2007
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          mk, maybe that will work... but it really all depends on whats at the top of your screen when you look at this page. Like if you have a bunch of notes or something, then it throws the whole alignment off. But w/e... you can read it now...


          • Dancing Marionette
            October 5, 2007
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            i didn't even think about having things at the top of the page messing anything up. without notes and all that does it allign right?

            • pointlessdayz
              October 6, 2007
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              not sure... but I'm not going to bother with it... its too much trouble.

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