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Fields of red and sea of green

Fields of red and sea of green
Come with me and we'll fly away.
Forget the world
And be with me
To frolic in the valley made of cement.
Join forces with me
And we'll break away
From the life we call reality.
So will you?
Be with me?

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Albert Einstein

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  • iamthebeatles
    October 2, 2007
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    love this poem!
    the entire thing is so unigue!
    good luck
    *peace*


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    I certainly will This ia a very creative and unique take on the prompt. I liked the reference to to the valley made with cement.
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene