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Halloween Fun

Soon it'll be that time of year
So let's give some Halloween cheer
Just as how the story goes
It's time for those gouls and foes

Bring out the pumpkins and rise of the dead
Yes that's what the skeleton said
Bring out the witches and broomsticks galore
Yes but then oh wait there's more

Wait until the dead of night
Fearful from the lack of light
Frozen with the thought of fright
On such a wonderful night

Soon it'll be that special day
For when I can gladly say
Time to watch the zombies run
And this time is frightful fun

Author notes

Ah ha! A poem on Halloween with an off ryhming scheme! I love it! What do you think?

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  • GypsyEyes
    December 4, 2007

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    "this is halloween! this is halloween!!!" is really all i have to say to this! oh and that our english class is a bunch of haters who don't understand the amaingness that is halloween!!!


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 1, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry

    Great poem, nice flow and structure. I like how you have really encompassed all that Halloween is in this.

    Happy Halloween
    Tammy


  • Silly Rabbit.
    October 7, 2007

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    Very cute poem. I love the rhyme and style used here. Tells a fright filled story full of fun, all of which we all eagerly await on Halloween. Keep up the good work and good luck on the contest


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 7, 2007
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    Great piece, best of luck to you in the contest!

  • RottenXHeartX
    October 4, 2007

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    I LOVE HALLOWEEN!!!

    This reminded me of what i love most - the creatures of the night *Evil laugh*
    Good work!


  • Borntowriteforever
    October 1, 2007
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    good job!

    Awesome! You pulled it off, a poem with actual rhyming!

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