Can we sit here and talk and have those martinis for just a tad?
There something I’ve been feeling, that I never knew I had
See I enjoy our conversations and the things that so relate
Some times I wonder how we met or is it really fate?
I’ll give you one example, on your views on children advocacy
My life is all about this cause for the entire world to see
But let me tell you about this feeling that you bring out of my heart
Excuse my hesitation; I just don’t know where to start
As you know I write poetry, the type you said you loved
So I wrote down these feelings, of what I was thinking of
Here goes
My heart is aflame of that you have set
Burning infatuations at the time we first met
Understand this affection, means little to the eye
But our simple commonality just never seems awry
Can you welcome my heart in your hands
Can you see my desire in your eyes
Will you take me to uncharted lands
Will you see this can’t be denied
Just know here now
That I am here for you
And I may never know how
You can feel this way too
Just tell me
Author notes
Just something that came to me. Any assumptions are purely incidental {Mykeee)
C. Combination of A and B.
A contest entry
- tell him how much you like him by Viyanna Rosemarie.
450 points, ended October 10, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - His words are like poison but his lies make you smile by edit my world..
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Asking Her by writer-of -poems.
600 points, ended March 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
This is a very deep poem, boy when you let your feelings flow you let them go, this poem is very touching it brought out a tidal wave of emotion in myself, because in the back of my mind, i always have that question what if. One of these days I am going going to stop asking that question and start living for the here and now. Maybe sometimes you have to take what you want, so to speak, like making the first move and letting that person just how you feel. Who knows the feelings could their own, just has they may share the same fear that you share, in letting it be known how you feel. You have done an excellent job with this poem, I love it from start to finish, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Now I thought you saw this one. dang. I started with Viyanna's contest but incorporated a lot of myself into it.
It workedto a certain extent so I had a flash in my my that said - now. Write a poem for her. I thought it gave it a certain twist I may even change some lines to make it a little more seductive. Maybe not. Any who
Glad you enjoyed it and sometimes you are right. Feelings are laid out there but restraint may be the best options in certain instances.
Thanks Sweetie ~ Mykeee
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This is one of those those poems that breaks all the poetic rules but still touches the reader,I won't ever give you a copy and paste comment and stay within the confines of borderline,the capitalization of each line when it's not a new line adds misplaced focus,yet the sincerity is felt,the presentation is original and apes no one one,you have the timbre of your own voice,don't lose it for anyone or poetic devices,poetry needs poets to push boundries and borders...
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....well sadly it didnt end in tragedy...this actually made me a little sad...because i dont get happy endings anymore....but man i just loved this! it was a fantabulous write...but it did make me smile which cancels out the lack of tragedy lol
thanks so mcuh for entering! -
Mykeee, I love how you had the lead-in to your poem there. Two for the price of one on this. Both parts were lovely and you always express your emotions so wonderfully with your words. The imagery was absolutely stunning and it left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you for always sharing in the gift of your elegant pen. Another excellent piece from you. Keep the ink flowing. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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I liked your poem but i have to end my contest, for reasons i'd rather not explain. Sorry, but I am still considering people, even though i have to end the contest.
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no problem thanks for the consideration
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Wow, so strong and honest, i love that. Thank you for entering, and I need you to put your name in the authors notes please.
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lol... love your author's notes
this is nicely penned... makes me wanna know who it's about
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hehehehehe!! stick with the notes, lol. I reserve the right to not incriminate myself
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thank you very much for this wonderful entry into my contest. i wish you well in the contest and am looking forward to reading more from you soon. viyanna rosemarie
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