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Nonsense

Roses are blue
Death is sweet
Insanity is lovely
Blood is neat

Forget me not
For I was never here
Remember me well
Because there's always something to fear

To ramble is fun
To write nonsense is smart
To feel is a pain
To write this insanity is my small part

See the forest not the tree
See the cover not the book
Everything is as it seems
Nothing's orginal as it looks

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written September 30, 2007

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  • freebird88
    October 1, 2007

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    I love the last stanza, the play on common saying is clever. The flow is beautiful and the rhyming is great. Phenomenal write!


  • Painter Meli
    October 1, 2007

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    lol

    I liked the last part. Dude, you totally made me laugh at the beginning (I was like, "Roses are not blue!"). Nice poetry (nonsence? Oh my god... blood is so not neat - it's kind of disastrous [I spelled that wrong, didn't I?] full of white blood cells and whatnot).

    Keep up the great word dudette! And I am not obsessed by Twilight (or New Moon or Eclipse), I only got inspirated.

    See you tomorrow, dudette, take care!

    Your friend,
    ~Meli♥