School lunch- eww
well its not just about
the food right??
Get in line...
talk,talk,tak- quit talking,
grab your food!
Hurry get a
seat- by yourself or with
some old friends.
Meet new people
if you like (you do
not have to!!).
Eat more than
you talk or talk more
than you eat.
Whatever floats your
boat dude! OR you could
just skip lunch.
Its school lunch-
people eat, people talk, people
skip during lunch.
Well its school
lunch again... what are you
going to do???
Author notes
The observations of high school lunches in one poem.
A contest entry
- Allpoetry New Members Contest September 2007 by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended October 7, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So what did you think about my poem? DId you like it???
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i like this
thisis a nice poem because it shows all the parts of school unch, and it appeals to people wh ogfo to school luch (such as myself) and its also very correct on all its points. done very well!!! thanks.
kutie_kayla13 -
Them School lunches made you appreciate your Mothers cooking... I know that much for sure. School dinners had that nasty trick of mixing cabbage with Mash Potato. I quickly said goodbye to that part of school life.
I would end up going to my grandmothers for a bit of spoiling... She liked me for that.
Great write, thanks for the trip down memory lane.
All the best in the contest.
~T.S~
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Welcome to AllPoetry
A great take on school lunch. I think we probably do all those things at some time during the school year. Well, I am not sure if I ever talk more that I eat at any food occasion
But I really did enjoy the poem. It brought back memories.
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Thanks for entering
Pretty much says it all. Talking, eating and mixing with friends or just sitting in the corner and observing. Nice write.
Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary -
Welcome to All Poetry
Yes I liked your poem. Obviously an important part of your school day. The socialising I guess is very important too.
Thanks so much for your entry in our contest
Gaylene
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Welcome to allpoetry and thanks for your entry
Interesting topic to write about regarding school. Nice flow and structure.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
Site Greeter -
Thanks for the entry and Welcome to AllPoetry
Well you could bring a sack lunch lol, loved the poem
Very. very relatable. Thank you for the entry and welcome to Allpoetry
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Lunch time is quite interesting then. Well written and good luck in the contest. Welcome to AP. I hope you enjoy reading, commenting on others' work and writing your own as much as the rest of us do.
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Hi Cirket
I like this write, mainly because here in Australia we do not have 'cafeterias' like in the USA
We just have 'Canteens' where you stand in line, get a meat pie or some hot chips and then wonder round the school eating, talking or just walking
Much more relaxed
Great write !
Thank you for your entry
BEST of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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