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I am Nikki.

People seem to have problems
With everything I write.
Why should I bother,
Justifying myself?
If you ask me to describe myself.
How can you take offense,
Or dislike it?
I am Nikki.
I like what I like,
I hate what I hate.
I might like what you like
Or I might not.
Don't judge me
Based on the prejudices
And teachings,
That you have been taught
Your whole life.
Judge me as me.
There should be no
Comparison board for humanity.
I am an individual.
Treat me as one.

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  • usually-untitled
    February 7, 2008

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    hey! my name's nikki too, and i've tried telling people not to compare me with anything else because each person is an individual... you just put it in a format that's more enjoyable


  • GoodKnightPoet
    December 13, 2007

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    Nikki, we can be individuals but we need mentors, teachers and even critics to help us become better persons. A poem I wrote addresses this http://allpoetry.com/poem/3608466

  • Diatribes
    November 6, 2007

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    Ha! What would the world be with out bias, judgement and assumption ? My guess is a world without humans
    By the way, nice to meet you, Nikki (i say that in all comments to people who write "who i am" poems, lame, i know)

  • helplesslydevoted1
    October 31, 2007

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    great write..i enjoyed reading this.....i always feel this way, its because people always have something to say...

  • deathbycrimson
    October 22, 2007
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    wonderful. loved it. why the fuck didnt i think of writing that?


  • ForNever.x
    October 11, 2007

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    ..

    Your poetry blows me away. You make the reader so involved and you make your poems likable by doing so. Only great poets can make the reader feel how they feel.

    You're a great poet.
    x


  • Spiritual Nature
    October 11, 2007

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    I like the self assuredness of this poem. I am Nikki, hear me roar. We should never judge others, yet I suspect it a human flaw. Great poem. Love, D.


  • tara wilson gold member
    October 11, 2007

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    I think everyone feels like this...why are there some who still judge though? I personally, do have writes like this, too...when you are sad, they need to come out, I am scared to post mine though...you read mostly what I post and thank you so much...


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 10, 2007

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    I hear you!!

    Loud & Clear!!! on many different levels too.
    Wasn't that long ago that if you joined your brothers
    in a game of softball and hit the ball a homerun that
    you would be automatically labeled a "tomboy"
    and today, the marketing guru's love to create labels
    just for the sole purpose and laughing at us as they
    take our hard earned money!!!
    Great strength in this poem!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen

  • JustBreathe gold member
    October 9, 2007
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    "Judge me as me.
    There should be no
    Comparison board for humanity.
    I am an individual.
    Treat me as one."

    Brava, Nikki!! We are all individuals and should be respected as such. How boring our world would be if everyone thought alike! Excellent write, poet!

    ....JustBreathe


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    And never a "Comparison board" for Nikki,
    as you convincingly make your case!

    Well-stated!

    Aesthete


  • Nikkisixxx
    October 7, 2007
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    Thank you thank you thank you!!!!


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 7, 2007
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    Excellent

    This is a mighty finre example of someone tellin it like it is and being themselves. I always figured if someone doesn't like who you are then Fuck them! they can't judge you for who you are even if they know you wlel. being yourself is what it is all about. this is a well put together piece. keep up the good work. Signed, Paul


  • freebird88
    September 30, 2007

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    I haven't read any of your previous poems, but this one is amazing. The flow is smooth and the feeling behind it is true and powerful. Outstanding piece!

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