When I reached out…
My hand touched nothing….
My time to fall…
Has finally come…
I’m not surprised…
It’s been expected…
I knew you’d be…
The one to run…
You used to tell me…
Not to trust you…
The very thing…
I came to do…
No one to blame…
For things that happened…
When all along…
You told the truth…
I brought this on…
By being stupid…
Invited trouble…
To step inside…
Invade my heart…
Discard my feelings…
Leave me lonely..
No peace of mind…
I’m still amazed…
There won’t be answers…
To questions burning…
In my thoughts….
I need your love…
But don’t expect it…
I’m not the one…
Your thinking of…
The final pain…
Isn’t who you’ll be with…
The ache subsides…
The need will fade….
But reaching out…
And finding nothing…
Can’t be erased…
And can’t be saved…
Author notes
OK i hope you read this it makes more sense all though he has hurt you and has been unloveing towards you reaching out and finding nothing is the worst thing he probably needs you and cant express his feeling in fear of losing is masculinity...It sucks life is hard and his is just abnormaly hard and needs you now more then ever if you really love him and care for him just talk to him and try to get him to talk to you but dont be pushy about it he will slowly open up and respect you for being there for you...Worry about his problems first be there as a friend help him through it and in the end he will love you more then ever! Good luck!
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YOU SHOULD HAVE WON
i like this poem even if it hits home not the way you'd think its like you are writing my ex's words to me from his heart and it makes me sad when i read something about my own self you did do a great job though i love this piece
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It's very hurtful to reach out and find someone isn't there. I can't see how I can contact him, as he lied about something and I can't just accept that without a good enough reason. I'm angry and hurt, as I've done EVERYTHING for him and I mean that, all I humanly can manage. I love him so and would do anything to be in his arms right about now. Thanks so much for taking a personal look on the subject. Loved your rhyme, too.
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