So he is a jerk
A loser, a liar
I have had those too
And at that time I thought
Love is suck
SUCK SUCK SUCK
Don't you just hate it
When you lay your heart
At a guy's feet
And he just tramples it
Like nothing matters
It makes you want to give up
Doesn't it
Especially when he cheats on you
For about 3 months
With your best friend
But let me tell you
Don't count love out
Just yet
It takes time
And the wait can seem endless
But when you find him
When you find that one
That sweeps you off of your feet
Calls you just to hear your voice
Looks at you as if
You are the only person in the room
Whispers those sweet nothings
Into your ear
Kisses you like you have
Never been kissed in your life
It makes it all worth it
Every hardship you encountered
Seems like so far away
And so pointless
All you can think about is him
And his love
It is a beautiful thing
Author notes
Andrew was a suck boyfriend. He is still suck, but let me tell you finding the perfect one is worth all the pain you ever endured before.
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oh so true... i havent found that one yet but i know what it feels like to give a guy your heart and all the love in it then for him to just walk all over it like dirt on the ground..
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well... the first half was actually very awesome... then comes the one called cliche... omg that was cliche!!!... lol but wht is love but one big cliche... lol....
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I've definitely had a sucky boyfriend before, and I'm almost positive I'll have one again. But it's worth all the stupid heartache, calls never made, and all that other stuff.. if only someday I could find the one I'm truly meant to be with, that will make me feel special, wanted, and safe. Great & expressive poem! =)
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Great encouragement! I want to challenge you to step outside the box and be a little more metaphoric! I think you've got the talent for it!...This was a lovely piece and I look forward to more! Keep it up!
Oh, and good luck in the contest!!!
Cynn -
I know, it's very hard indeed. I just can't help wishing it was him who would do that and thinking, 'is he messed up and cares, or is he just a git?' on any account, I am lost and hurt. I am glad you could share your story, that does sound pretty sh*tty of him.
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A great, encouraging poem, Liz! Guys are stupid morons who wouldn't know a great girl in front of their face. But there are some guys out there still, and girls can't give up. A great uplifting poem, Liz.
Keep it up!
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