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Would you be here for me?

All these years
Never you always me
I was the one
Filled with animosity
Always the one
Who was in the wrong
You were the one
Deceiving all along
Always going out
Chilling with your crew
When I did the same
You would leave, I knew
Had to try though
Just so I could see
If the time came
Would you be here for me?

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  • PascalePalmer
    October 7, 2007
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    OOPS..........

    Here's your applause!!

  • PascalePalmer
    October 7, 2007

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    Provocative Write

    A very real testament to a test that you posed. The provocative part is knowing the outcome, what do you do with that information? There definitely isn't one
    answer to what works best.....


  • Gwenevere
    October 6, 2007

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    Ah yes, been there, done that.One rule for one and all that.Good for you.I hope you enjoy your new found freedom, Ros


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    awesome

    yea i so get this! nice little short poem with so much packed into it

    great write thanx for adding me by the way


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    Wow... this is sooo true. I was in a relationship exactly like this. He was always going out, but absolutely hated it when I went out!! In the end, when I took back my power and asserted my independence... he left!! And... I'm better off for it.

    Great writing here... look forward to reading the rest!!

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