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Taking the Risk

this all too vulnerable vessel
beaten, battered and wounded
is in your hands, risking it all
walking on emotional eggshells


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  • AngelicMistress gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    Hi: 

     

    This is a wonderful piece.....

    Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck to you.....

    AngelicMistress...Tanya