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Golden Eyes

When I heard your laugh
I only felt hate
To see you smile
Was something I loathed

For I know I could never have him
You had already won
This vile game of love

You came in like a whore
Ready for doing the nasty, between the sheets
A greedy smirk
Curved your stained lips

You looked at me with victory
Gleaming in your golden eyes
As you kissed the man under you
With a full throttle tongue

Hips ground down in exaltation
Arousing moans to part edgeless mouths
Of you and him

I stepped back in anger
For the defeat took its blow
I couldn't ever have him
No matter how long ago we loved

For I was the re-abused ex
And you the new found girlfriend...

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  • tabbykat10988
    October 20, 2007

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    LOVE IT!!! its about something many girls have gone through.. to see your man even if he is an x with another girl... it hits right where it hurts especially if your not over him... and that other girl sounds like a bitch!!! lol.. thanks for entering and good luck...
    -tk