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Emptiness

Missing image
Darkness consumes
A black hole
Emptiness forever
An eclipse devours
The candle extinguished
Apocalypse!
My life

Author notes

option #5 Dark

A contest entry

Can you feel it?

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  • RX-Queen
    June 5, 2008
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    Great write, short and to the point, well done. Thanx for entering and good luck


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 8, 2008
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    darlintlc

    Great write For such a short write.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 1, 2007
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    Cool!

    Short but incredibly dark piece, well chosen words. Good luck in the contest!


  • PerfectImperfection
    October 1, 2007
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    An intriguing piece of dark, in short. Thank you so much for your entry!