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My Lover the Tree

Come my tree
Come to me
I see you waving at my window
I hear you knocking for attention

Oh if I weren't in class
We would be alone at last
But do flee my tree!
An enemy sits near me

They want to break your arms
My lovely tree oh flee
For your arms are lovely to me
If only we were alone just you and me

Author notes

Hehehehe. I wrote this during class and the wind was blowing a pine tree back and forth and it would hit the window.
There is this guy in my class who gets freaked out WAY too easily and threatened to break off its branches. That kind of made me....unreasonably angry for some reason. And i made up the idea that the tree was my lover to explain my odd flare of anger....either that I got angry that the guy spoke. He just can't shut up in general but OMG I hope none of you ever have a guy like this one in your class.

No I'm not a tree hugger or promote green peace. I'm a silly and odd person who write silly and odd things...and fantasy stuff because I'm a geek.

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  • Lady Mak
    May 22, 2008

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    Very good

    Very cleverly written I did enjoy this I think your heart spoke out strongly as your pen has confirmed. Liked your authors notes too made me smile. My emotional response to the poem was well said, good for you! A very well written poem thanks for sharing.