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I Did Not Know You

I did not know you
  But the sudden, senseless loss of you
  Etches a sadness in my soul

I did not know you
  Unaware that I could
  Now deprived of the chance

I did not know you
  Did not know the creases of your smile
  The rare tear that ventured to moisten your cheek
  The laughter that overcame

I did not know you
  Where you found your comfort
  Who you could confide in
  Why you burned so bright
  So short

I did not know you
  And yet I see you
  In their faces, in their tears

I did not know you
  But I feel you
  Comforting
  For after the mourning, comes light
  And before morning, there must come night

I did not know you...
            ...but I did.

Author notes

In memory of Sarah Fox. Written June 2, 2004, soon after her murder. I didn't know her, but I knew a lot of people who did and could see the affect she'd had on them.

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  • Poopa Thug
    November 22, 2009

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    Dude I actually liked this.

    This is pretty good. I think it actually illustrates something great, being able to sense others from others memories. That being said great work and it is also great because it was written for someone. It was a sad thing and I know what you been by it.


  • Drac
    May 1, 2008

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    This is very well written, but also very sad...
    But I understand what you mean, as I've experienced something like this when a good friend of some of my friends died... Well written =)