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Fall is for Falling

My breath is deep--and
the fall light glows in your eyes,
How I burn for you.

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it keeps coming up 16 words/16 syllables. But when I count there are 17. And I can count.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    October 1, 2007
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    Score: 86.9

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