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Where I'm from

I知 from scents of grease
as I知 tucked into bed.
Helping my mother
to make and weigh bread.

I知 from scrapes and cuts
of training wheels gone
The bruises and carpet burns
of brotherly love.

I知 from magical stories,
from Sabrina to So Weird.
Enchanted by Charmed
From the day it premiered.

I知 from salsa and chips,
with jukebox tunes.
Afternoons with my mother
and x-men cartoons.

I知 from flashlight tag
in the dark of the night.
Spinning in circles
and screams of delight.
With holes in the knees,
grass stains, and kites,
running through sprinklers,
and climbing great heights.

Most of all I知 from jokes and laughs
Family encouraging and guiding my paths.
Never a let down, they池e always there
I am from my family who will always care.

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  • Aiyoris Maryian
    October 4, 2007

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    This reminds me of my childhood without the brotherly love since I'm an only child. I miss that life of simplicity. So Weird was the show, though, for real! Fiona was so cool!


    • Twilight4Eternity
      October 5, 2007
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      Fiona was awesome! Thats cool you liked that show, I watched it all the time. Thanks for the comment


  • going nowhere
    September 30, 2007

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    oh.. i really liked this, too! and it seems we like alot of the same things... except the tv stuff for me... but the flashlight tag and spinning in circles... running through sprinklers.... etc... etc.. this was REALLY good... and unlike The Cold Truth... i can keep on going on... because i AM a girl...

    i liked the softness of this with a great flow and rhyming that wasn't forced at all... one of my favorites by you...


  • The Cold Truth
    September 30, 2007

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    wow... this is so good! the flow was amazing... and i liked the thought of it, such a light and cheery feel... now i am going to shut up before i sound even more like a girl.. lol
    good job!